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This looks great CP! You might be able to frame the castle a bit more by increasing the left tree foliage vertically and pulling the right tree's branch around to the right a bit more.
I can't say I really like the tree on the left. It's dark trunk running parallel to the edge of the page is distracting and makes the picture feel cramped. Not to mention that it looks a lot less rendered than the rest of the image. You might consider adding more space on the left.
Ya rending that left tree foilage could be pretty, but I'd say be careful with romoving that left tree. Right now it's the only thing from keep my eyes from sliding off that side of the page. Here's somthing though; Right now there are essentialy 4 eliments to your piece. The left tree, the right trees, the walkway and castle black. Currently your left tree is about as high as castle black and your walkway is about as high as the right trees. So youre compostion goes up, down, up down to about equal hights. Things that could help that could be making castle black taller or making that left tree shorter. But I love the curve youve created with the walkway that leads me straight to castle black!
Love the revisions!
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